Can you guys provide feedback on my game idea?

my video game storyline is about a boy called zane who lives on a now abandon earth almost 200,000 years in the future. he lives in a small town with many people, but one day a pirate organization invades the town and he accidently ends up on their spaceship, and it lands on the earth like planet called bogon. like jak and dexter it is up to him and a group of skilled people to save the city of calabri from the evil magnoids. after this game, him and his now new best freinds embark on another adventure with an even better storyline. they get to explore the maraxus galaxy and save it from the evil Professor Neturious and his alliance of alein races trying to get revenge on the galactic government.