I'm attempting to write a book what do you think?

Wow! I think you have the talent to write a book, for your generation. I read a lot and since I am 67 years young I am not familiar with your lingo. My children are all grown up. But you have the knack, so I hope you stick with it. Just a thought, you need to know where the story is going, for instance, what is your message overall? Your are off to a good start.